[wp-trac] [WordPress Trac] #63787: Fix typo: “such as; Performance” → “such as performance”

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#63787: Fix typo: “such as; Performance” → “such as performance”
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 Reporter:  aarti1318     |       Owner:  (none)
     Type:  defect (bug)  |      Status:  new
 Priority:  normal        |   Milestone:  6.9
Component:  Site Health   |     Version:  6.1
 Severity:  normal        |  Resolution:
 Keywords:  has-patch     |     Focuses:  administration, ui-copy
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Comment (by westonruter):

 I think the last sentence can be further simplified:

 > They may include improvements to things such as performance and user
 experience.

 The "such as" makes the "and more" redundant.

 But since things come better in threes, how about adding "security" since
 this is one of the common categories:

 > They may include improvements to things such as security, performance,
 and user experience.

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Ticket URL: <https://core.trac.wordpress.org/ticket/63787#comment:6>
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