[wp-trac] [WordPress Trac] #25688: Add Help Tab doesn't explain Auto Update Admin

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#25688: Add Help Tab doesn't explain Auto Update Admin
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 Reporter:  RDall                    |       Owner:
     Type:  defect (bug)             |      Status:  new
 Priority:  normal                   |   Milestone:  3.8
Component:  Help/About               |     Version:  trunk
 Severity:  normal                   |  Resolution:
 Keywords:  has-patch docs-feedback  |
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Comment (by Hanni):

 I'm not sure if it's just me, or a British/American thing, but the tenses
 here - "Since 3.7, WordPress has the ability to apply maintenance and
 security releases automatically. " read awkwardly for me. I'd suggest "has
 had" or even starting the sentence with WordPress has the ability.. and
 ignoring since 3.7, since it's somewhat superfluous - we're talking in the
 present tense and the person reading it will only be reading it if they
 have a version of WordPress which supports automatic updates.

 "When updates are available, the number of available updates will appear
 in a bubble on the left hand menu as a notification." > "When updates
 available a bubble notification containing the number of available updates
 will appear in the .."  perhaps? Is it called the "left-hand" menu? Nav?

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