[wp-docs] Business Blogging and Shopping page

[Dave Holowiski]

First, I'm new to this list and to editing the codex. I apologize ahead of
time if I step on any toes or make any mistakes.

I'm looking at this page:
http://codex.wordpress.org/Business_Blogging_and_Shopping and I think it
needs a total re-write, as it seems to be endorsing wp-ecommerce as 'the'
ecommerce plugin, plus the intro and ending paragraphs seem really spammy to
me.

Any suggestions, does anybody want to hold my hand as I do this, or should I
just jump right in?
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